Thursday, May 21, 2015

Forbidden The Stars

What is with that formatting? It doesn't add anything to the blurb, it just makes it really choppy and hard to understand. Were they trying to make it a poem? 

Please do not info dump in your blurb >.< First of all, that gives away so much of your book that I no longer am interested in reading it but also it bogs the reader down with way too much unnecessary information. If they really need to know all of that to just get interested in your book, you may need a revision. 


Forbidden The Stars (The Interstellar Age Book 1) 

Valmore Daniels

At the end of the 21st century, a catastrophic accident 
in the asteroid belt has left two surveyors dead. 
There is no trace of their young son, 
Alex Manez, or of the asteroid itself. 

On the outer edge of the solar system, 
the first manned mission to Pluto, 
led by the youngest female astronaut in 
NASA history, has led to an historic discovery: 
there is a marker left there by an alien race 
for humankind to find. We are not alone! 

While studying the alien marker, it begins to react. 
Four hours later, the missing asteroid appears 
in a Plutonian orbit, along with young Alex Manez, 
who has developed some alarming side-effects from his 
exposure to the kinetic element they call Kinemet. 

From the depths of a criminal empire based on Luna, 
an expatriate seizes the opportunity to wrest control 
of outer space, and takes swift action. 

The secret to faster-than-light speed is up for grabs, 
and the race for interstellar space begins! 

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